Google Spreadsheet - Quick Analysis + Evaluation

It is the first week for the Secondary One students in my school. To slowly get them into the scheme of things like using ICT for learning, I got them into groups of fours to analyse another group's "spiced up" version of a sentence they have picked out of a box. The objectives of the lesson were to:

1. Pick out how the sentence has been "spiced up" with adjectives, adverbs or even a change of verb.
2. Evaluate that group's "spiced up" sentence in terms of its effectiveness in creating a mental image of the moment being described.

Here's an image of what they did.

A quick analysis and evaluation of an "improved" sentence